Writer's Opinion - How to Be Successful

To the writer’ opinion, successful people must be someone who had not only broken his own boundary of customary habits but also managed to always look for something new and transform himself to the match the demands of the world. [2 sentence: the funnel model]

First, focusing on create something new is a key opening the door of success. B. [Lack of brige] Let take Picasso talent to be the example. To some common conception about art, a masterpiece has to describe the world outside to be as real as exactly in visual, such as a portrait of the beauty or a landscape of the greenery. However, while mosaic patterns or unusual pieces of different color tone in Picasso’s drawings seem to make no sense and so strangely new to common eyes, art specialists highly value Picasso drawings to be masterpiece based to professional analysis. He had brought a new trend of art to the currents. He had the brave to paint things differently and had get over the olds to concur the news, which makes him as a renowned successful artist. R [restatement should be short + transition word]

In order to become successful, one always has to transform himself to adapt to the evolving world. Another point is that success will not easily come or even never get to be caught in the hands of who never accept to take the risks to change themselves. For instance, a teacher nowadays cannot be a good one by just conducting traditional method of giving only dull and theoretical lectures. Students now need no more lectures about knowledge which they find by themselves with ease on the internet. They need the skills to be self-learners for life, which only can be obtained when being taught by new learner-centered methodologies such as project-based learning, inquiry based-learning or flipped classroom. Those new techniques demand the teacher to leave the safe zone of his traditional and used-to-be ways of teaching and to adapt and enhance himself to the new methods. Teachers need to change for better.

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