A Call To Action: Regulate Use Of Cell Phones On The Road

David *******

English 101-B

14 March 2004

A Call to Action:

Regulate Use of Cell Phones on the Road

When a cell phone goes off in a classroom or at a concert, we

are irritated, but at least our lives are not endangered. When we

are on the road, however, irresponsible cell phone users are more

than irritating: They are putting our lives at risk. Many of us have

witnessed drivers so distracted by dialing and chatting that they

resemble drunk drivers, weaving between lanes, for example, or

nearly running down pedestrians in crosswalks. A number of bills

to regulate use of cell phones on the road have been introduced in

state legislatures, and the time has come to push for their passage.

Regulation is needed because drivers using phones are seriously

impaired and because laws on negligent and reckless driving are

not sufficient to punish offenders.

No one can deny that cell phones have caused traffic deaths

and injuries. Cell phones were implicated in three fatal accidents

in November 1999 alone. Early in November, two-year-old Morgan

Pena was killed by a driver distracted by his cell phone. Morgan's

mother, Patti Pena, reports that the driver "ran a stop sign at 45

mph, broadsided my vehicle and killed Morgan as she sat in her car

seat." A week later, corrections officer Shannon Smith, who was

guarding prisoners by the side of the road, was killed by a woman

distracted by a phone call (Besthoff). On Thanksgiving weekend

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that same month, John and Carole Hall were killed when a Naval

Academy midshipman crashed into their parked car. The driver said

in court that when he looked up from the cell phone he was dial-

ing, he was three feet from the car and had no time to stop

(Stockwell B8).

Expert testimony, public opinion, and even cartoons suggest

that driving while phoning is dangerous. Frances Bents, an expert

on the relation between cell phones and accidents, estimates that

between 450 and 1,000 crashes a year have some connection to

cell phone use (Layton C9). In a survey published by Farmers In-

surance Group, 87% of those polled said that cell phones affect a

driver's ability, and 40% reported having close calls with drivers

distracted by phones. Many cartoons have depicted the very real

dangers of driving while distracted (see Fig. 1).

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Fig. 1. Chan Lowe, cartoon, Washington Post 22 July 2000: A21.

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Scientific research confirms the dangers of using phones

while on the road. In 1997 an important study appeared in the

New England Journal of Medicine. The authors, Donald Redelmeier

and Robert Tibshirani, studied 699 volunteers who made their cell

phone bills available in order to confirm the times when they had

placed calls. The participants agreed to report any nonfatal colli-

sion in which they were involved. By comparing the time of a col-

lision with the phone records, the researchers assessed the dangers

of driving while phoning. Here are their results:

We found that using a cellular telephone was associ-

ated with a risk of having a motor vehicle collision

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