Example for Personal Statement
Essay by jonathan-xavier Owens • March 29, 2016 • Presentation or Speech • 340 Words (2 Pages) • 1,082 Views
Personal statement draft
Throughout my career as a student I have always wanted to be a brilliant. The kind of brilliance that made people look in awe. I looked at the way people were deemed a better person in society if you were smart and that made me slightly jealous. I had always been an above average student in high school and as such I was not content.Experiencing this constant branding of unspectacular has created this passive hunger within me to be successful to silence everyone . I was born to a single mother in the USA and we moved to Nigeria and I have watched my mother toil and grovel so we can have the best things her money could afford.People might say he has no father figure how can he know what it is to be a man but I will always concur as my mother has shown me what it is to be a man and as a matter of fact
Owens Xavier
2015FA Introduction to Sociology (SOC-111-352)
Presentation critic work
Name | PRO | CON |
Thomas Thompson | Had a good array of pictures and explained effectively. | Got kind of boring towards the end. |
Dominique Simmons | spoke with authority with her voice | however as she progressed her voice got timid.Was at times not organised |
Jaysia Noels | powerpoint had a really good display | Didn't seem sure of herself when she spoke |
Danny Ngo | Utilised the vocabulary words well | had to struggle to hear due to how low he spoke |
Sarah McAdory | was very efficient in her delivery | however i had to listen close cause her voice was a bit low |
Jaed Godwin-Jackson | presentation was neat and concise | was a bit too loud and didn't look like she took it seriously |
Shakorya Campbell | had a well done powerpoint and was well organised. | could not see the correlation between her topic and presentation(power point) |
Rodrick Brown | had good pictures and related them well to the topic. | i think he was a tad bit over eccentric |
Elvis Bah | manage to convey his points out | he repeated points |
Monica Arroyo | had a good presence and explained well | however it seemed a bit dry,like as if she wasn't interested |
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